Tuesday, June 2, 2009

To Say Nothing But Thank You



On a gray morning, having just uncovered the newly planted flowers that I had to cover yet again because of frost, my favorite literary magazine, The Sun, offered this lovely bit of light.





To Say Nothing But Thank You

by Jeanne Lohmann


All day I try to say nothing but thank you,

breathe the syllables in and out with every step I

take through the rooms of my house and outside into

a profusion of shaggy-headed dandelions in the garden

where the tulips' black stamens shake in their crimson cups.

I am saying thank you, yes, to this burgeoning spring

and to the cold wind of its changes. Gratitude comes easy

after a hot shower, when my loosened muscles work,

when eyes and mind begin to clear and even unruly
hair combs into place.


Dialogue with the invisible can go on every minute,

and with surprising gaiety I am saying thank you as I

remember who I am, a woman learning to praise

something as small as dandelion petals floating on the
streaming surface of the bowl of vegetable soup,

my happy, savoring tongue.


-- published in the May 2009 issue of The Sun


This poem requires no commentary, yet its words speak such wisdom to my heart: All the things I've been "trying to" learn about living in awareness, the gratitude it triggers, and the wondrous fact that we need go nowhere save within this moment to commune with God. Perhaps my favorite line of all is "with surprising gaiety I am saying thank you as I remember who I am."

4 comments:

Mailizhen said...

The Sun is one of my favorite magazines of all time. It's the only one I save, year in and year out. The Readers Write section is a special treat.

Stratoz said...

to say thanks throughout the day makes it much easier to answer the often heard question... "what's new?" or "How are you?" or "What's going on?"

Sheila Deeth said...

Saying thank you today.

Anonymous said...

a rabbit trail brought me to your door. how thankful i am.

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